Social science: Paragraph writing

In the last few past days, Mr Langley taught us how to write a paragraph. I've been writing this paragraph for 1 period.

This is my paragraph:

Matariki is the Maori name for a group of stars which is known as the seven stars. Traditionally, Matariki rises on the last few days of May. Most of the people thought that the Matariki was Important because it was a great time to harvest and plant new crops. They celebrate Matariki by gathering with whanau and reflecting on the pasts.